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POP

Sitting in his seat, a seat broad and broken
In, sprinkled with ashes
Pop switches channels, takes another
Shot of Seagrams, neat, and asks
What to do with me, a green young man
Who fails to consider the
Flim and flam of the world, since
Things have been easy for me;
I stare hard at his face, a stare
That deflects off his brow;
I’m sure he’s unaware of his
Dark, watery eyes, that
Glance in different directions,
And his slow, unwelcome twitches,
Fail to pass.
I listen, nod,
Listen, open, till I cling to his pale,
Beige T-shirt, yelling,
Yelling in his ears, that hang
With heavy lobes, but he’s still telling
His joke, so I ask why
He’s so unhappy, to which he replies...
But I don’t care anymore, cause
He took too damn long, and from
Under my seat, I pull out the
Mirror I’ve been saving; I’m laughing,
Laughing loud, the blood rushing from his face
To mine, as he grows small,
A spot in my brain, something
That may be squeezed out, like a
Watermelon seed between
Two fingers.
Pop takes another shot, neat,
Points out the same amber
Stain on his shorts that I’ve got on mine, and
Makes me smell his smell, coming
From me; he switches channels, recites an old poem
He wrote before his mother died,
Stands, shouts, and asks
For a hug, as I shrink, my
Arms barely reaching around
His thick, oily neck, and his broad back; ’cause
I see my face, framed within
Pop’s black-framed glasses
And know he’s laughing too.

UNDERGROUND

Under water grottos, caverns
Filled with apes
That eat figs.
Stepping on the figs
That the apes
Eat, they crunch.
The apes howl, bare
Their fangs, dance,
Tumble in the
Rushing water,
Musty, wet pelts
Glistening in the blue.

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Date: 2009-01-30 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] led-zeppelined.livejournal.com
Обама ещё и поэт?

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Date: 2009-01-30 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ukhudshanskiy.livejournal.com
Да, несомненно. Вот от сюда утащил: http://www.nytimes.com/2008/05/18/us/politics/18poems.html
Чего метафоры стоят:
A spot in my brain, something
That may be squeezed out, like a
Watermelon seed between
Two fingers.
Бытует мнение, что Обам - современный Пушкен, хотя мне он больше напоминает Неруду.

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Date: 2009-01-30 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] led-zeppelined.livejournal.com
Спасибо за ценную информацию.. В самом деле очень недурно пишет.

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Date: 2009-01-30 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ukhudshanskiy.livejournal.com
Не за что. Наверное и поновее можно что-нибудь найти.

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Date: 2009-01-30 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] led-zeppelined.livejournal.com
Если мало ли найдёте, прошу сообщить дополнительно :)

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Date: 2009-01-30 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zabriski.livejournal.com
большинство тамошник поэтов игнорирует условие ритм-рифма

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Date: 2009-01-30 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ukhudshanskiy.livejournal.com
Свободный стих. Говорю ведь мне Неруду напоминает.

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Date: 2009-01-30 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zabriski.livejournal.com
я у них практически не видела "несвободных"

посмотрите в процентном соотношении эти свободные и несвободные
так многие понапишут прозу, разрубив её на короткие фразы, а потом говорят, что поэты

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Date: 2009-01-30 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ukhudshanskiy.livejournal.com
понапишут прозу, разрубив её на короткие фразы, а потом говорят, что поэты
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Тоже надо будет при случае попробовать.

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Date: 2009-02-01 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ukhudshanskiy.livejournal.com
Жалостливые однако.

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